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git-svn-id: http://svn.net-core.org/repos/t-engine4@6276 51575b47-30f0-44d4-a5cc-537603b46e54

game/modules/tome/data/chats/point-zero-zemekkys.lua

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 newChat{ id="welcome",
 	action = function(npc, player) npc.talked_times = (npc.talked_times or 0) + 1 end,
-	text = [[@playername@, nice to see you again! Or is this the first time you see me?]],
+	text = [[@playername@, nice to see you again! Or is this the first time that you have seen me?]],
 	answers = {
 		{"Farewell, Grand Keeper."},
 		{"Yes, this is our first meeting.", jump="first", cond=function(npc, player) return not npc.talked_times end},
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ newChat{ id="welcome",
 
 newChat{ id="first",
 	text = [[Ah, for you perhaps, but not for me.
-Listen, someday you will encounter me again but it will not be me as of now. A younger me, if you will.
+Listen, someday you will encounter me again but it will not be me you see now. It will be younger me, if you will.
 This is very important: do not tell my previous me about me. Understood?]],
 	answers = {
 		{"I think so..."},

game/modules/tome/data/texts/intro-chronomancer.lua

@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@
 
 return [[Welcome #LIGHT_GREEN#@name@#WHITE#.
 You are a chronomancer, a Keeper of Reality.
-Keepers of Reality are a group of chronomancers who took upon the self-assigned task of preserving the timelines around Eyal.
+The Keepers of Reality are a group of chronomancers who took upon the self-assigned task of preserving the timelines around Eyal.
 
-You have trained most of your life in the 'town' of Point Zero, the stronghold of the Keepers, placed at the very center of all time threads since the Spellblaze disrupted the temporal streams and permitted chronomancy to exist.
+You have trained for most of your life in the 'town' of Point Zero, the stronghold of the Keepers, placed at the very center of all time threads since the Spellblaze disrupted the temporal streams and permitted chronomancy to exist.
 Point Zero keepers must constantly stay vigilant against the monstrous horrors of the unreality outside.
 
 You have heard about temporal disruptions in Maj'Eyal and want to investigate.