typos

git-svn-id: http://svn.net-core.org/repos/t-engine4@2595 51575b47-30f0-44d4-a5cc-537603b46e54

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/bird.lua

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{ base="BASE_NPC_BIRD", define_as = "NPC_PHOENIX",
 	name = "Phoenix", unique = true,
 	display = "B", color=colors.VIOLET,
 	rarity = 200,
-	desc = [[Ever burning, ever dying, ever reviving, the Phoenix swoops upon you, seeking to share its fiery fate with you.]],
+	desc = [[Ever burning, ever dying, ever reviving, the Phoenix swoops down upon you, seeking to share its fiery fate with you.]],
 	level_range = {40, 75}, exp_worth = 10,
 	max_life = 1000, life_rating = 23, fixed_rating = true,
 	max_mana = 1000,

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/cold-drake.lua

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_COLD_DRAKE",
 	name = "cold drake hatchling", color=colors.WHITE, display="d",
-	desc = [[A drake hatchling, not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]],
+	desc = [[A drake hatchling. Not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]],
 	level_range = {8, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 1,
 	rank = 1, size_category = 2,

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/fire-drake.lua

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_FIRE_DRAKE",
 	name = "fire drake hatchling", color=colors.RED, display="d",
-	desc = [[A drake hatchling, not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]],
+	desc = [[A drake hatchling; not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]],
 	level_range = {8, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 1,
 	rank = 1, size_category = 2,

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/horror.lua

@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 	subtype = "temporal",
 	name = "temporal devourer", color=colors.CRIMSON,
-	desc = "A headless round creature with stubtly legs and arms.  Its body seems to be all teeth.",
+	desc = "A headless round creature with stubbly legs and arms.  Its body seems to be all teeth.",
 	level_range = {10, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 1,
 	rank = 2,
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 	subtype = "temporal",
 	dredge = 1,
 	name = "dredgling", color=colors.TAN,
-	desc = "A small pink skinned humanoid with large bulbous eyes.",
+	desc = "A small pink-skinned humanoid with large bulbous eyes.",
 	level_range = {10, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 1,
 	rank = 2,
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 	subtype = "temporal",
 	dredge = 1,
 	name = "temporal dredge", color=colors.PINK,
-	desc = "A hulking pink skinned creature with long arms as thick as tree trunks.  It drags it's knuckles on the ground as it lumbers towards you.",
+	desc = "A hulking pink-skinned creature with long arms as thick as tree trunks.  It drags its knuckles on the ground as it lumbers towards you.",
 	level_range = {15, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 4,
 	rank = 2,
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 	subtype = "temporal",
 	dredge = 1,
 	name = "dredge captain", color=colors.SALMON,
-	desc = "A thin pink skinned creature with long spindly arms.  Half it's body is old and wrinkly and the other half appears quite young.",
+	desc = "A thin pink-skinned creature with long spindly arms.  Half its body is old and wrinkly and the other half appears quite young.",
 	level_range = {20, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 6,
 	rank = 3,
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 	subtype = "temporal",
 	name = "temporal stalker", color=colors.STEEL_BLUE,
-	desc = "A slender mettallic monstrousity with long claws in place of fingers and razor sharp teeth.",
+	desc = "A slender metallic monstrosity with long claws in place of fingers and razor sharp teeth.",
 	level_range = {20, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 6,
 	size_category = 3,
@@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 	subtype = "temporal",
 	name = "void horror", color=colors.GREY,
-	desc = "It looks like a hole in spacetime, but you get the impression it's somehow more then that.",
+	desc = "It looks like a hole in spacetime, but you get the impression it's somehow more than that.",
 	level_range = {20, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 4,
 	rank = 2,
@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_HORROR",
 			if t.type[1] == "chronomancy/anomalies" then ts[#ts+1] = id end
 		end
 		self:forceUseTalent(rng.table(ts), {ignore_energy=true})
-		game.logSeen(self, "%s has collappsed in upon itself.", self.name)
+		game.logSeen(self, "%s has collapsed in upon itself.", self.name)
 	end,
 
 	resolvers.sustains_at_birth(),
@@ -675,3 +675,5 @@ newEntity{ base="BASE_NPC_HORROR", define_as = "GRGGLCK_TENTACLE",
 		end
 	end,
 }
+
+

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/jelly.lua

@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_JELLY",
 	unique = true,
 	name = "Malevolent Dimensional Jelly", color=colors.VIOLET, image="npc/jelly-darkgrey.png",
 	blood_color = colors.VIOLET,
-	desc = "A strange black blob on the dungeon floor, through it you seem to be able to see other times and places. As you stare you see things moving out of it.",
+	desc = "A strange black blob on the dungeon floor; through it you seem to be able to see other times and places. As you stare you see things moving out of it.",
 	level_range = {25, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 50,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(50,90), life_rating = 5,

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/multihued-drake.lua

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_MULTIHUED_DRAKE",
 	name = "multi-hued drake hatchling", color=colors.PURPLE, display="d",
-	desc = [[A drake hatchling, not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]],
+	desc = [[A drake hatchling. Not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]],
 	level_range = {15, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 1,
 	rank = 1, size_category = 2,

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/naga.lua

@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ Tide huntresses wield both magic and hunting skills, making them terrible foes.]
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_NAGA",
 	name = "naga psyren", color=colors.YELLOW, image="npc/naga_psyren.png",
-	desc = [[A naga psyren, she looks at you with great intensity.
+	desc = [[A naga psyren; she looks at you with great intensity.
 Psyrens are dangerous nagas that can directly assault your mind.]],
 	level_range = {36, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 4,

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/storm-drake.lua

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_STORM_DRAKE",
 	name = "storm drake hatchling", color=colors.BLUE, display="d",
-	desc = [[A drake hatchling, not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]],
+	desc = [[A drake hatchling. Not too powerful by itself, but it usually comes with its brothers and sisters.]],
 	level_range = {8, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 1,
 	rank = 1, size_category = 2,

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/sunwall-town.lua

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ newEntity{
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_SUNWALL_TOWN",
 	name = "human guard", color=colors.LIGHT_UMBER,
-	desc = [[A stern looking guard, he will not let you disturb the town.]],
+	desc = [[A stern-looking guard, he will not let you disturb the town.]],
 	level_range = {1, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 1,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(70,80),
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_SUNWALL_TOWN",
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_SUNWALL_TOWN",
 	name = "elven archer", color=colors.UMBER,
-	desc = [[A stern looking guard, he will not let you disturb the town.]],
+	desc = [[A stern-looking guard, he will not let you disturb the town.]],
 	level_range = {1, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 3,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(50,60),

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/swarm.lua

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ newEntity{
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_INSECT",
 	name = "midge swarm", color=colors.UMBER, image="npc/midge_swarm.png",
-	desc = "A swarm of midges, they want blood.",
+	desc = "A swarm of midges; they want blood.",
 	level_range = {1, 25}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 1,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(1,2),

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/telugoroth.lua

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ newEntity{
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_TELUGOROTH",
 	name = "telugoroth", color=colors.KHAKI,
-	desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself.  It's blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]],
+	desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself.  Its blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]],
 	level_range = {10, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 2,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(70,80),
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_TELUGOROTH",
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_TELUGOROTH",
 	name = "greater telugoroth", color=colors.YELLOW,
-	desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself.  It's blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]],
+	desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself.  Its blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]],
 	level_range = {12, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 4,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(70,80), life_rating = 10,
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_TELUGOROTH",
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_TELUGOROTH",
 	name = "ultimate telugoroth", color=colors.GOLD,
-	desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself.  It's blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]],
+	desc = [[A temporal elemental, rarely encountered except by those who travel through time itself.  Its blurred form constantly shifts before your eyes.]],
 	level_range = {15, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 6,
 	rank = 3,

game/modules/tome/data/general/npcs/yaech.lua

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ newEntity{
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH",
 	name = "yaech diver", color=colors.BLUE,
-	desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks, they share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]],
+	desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks. They share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]],
 	level_range = {1, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 1,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(50,70),
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH",
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH",
 	name = "yaech hunter", color=colors.UMBER,
-	desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks, they share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]],
+	desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks. They share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]],
 	level_range = {1, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 2,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(90,110),
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH",
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH",
 	name = "yaech mindslayer", color=colors.YELLOW,
-	desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks, they share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]],
+	desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks. They share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]],
 	level_range = {2, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 2,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(90,110),
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH",
 
 newEntity{ base = "BASE_NPC_YAECH",
 	name = "yaech psion", color=colors.RED,
-	desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks, they share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]],
+	desc = [[Yaeches are an aquatic subspecies of yeeks. They share the same psionic powers, but they refuse to take part in the Way.]],
 	level_range = {3, nil}, exp_worth = 1,
 	rarity = 3,
 	max_life = resolvers.rngavg(80,90),