diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/birth/classes/celestial.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/birth/classes/celestial.lua
index 669c9507fac12df62ddbfba3c0f0dd1d2cc17115..3e99e360be378bd12e1359c31cb210b97c338621 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/birth/classes/celestial.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/birth/classes/celestial.lua
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ newBirthDescriptor{
locked_desc = "The magic of the heavens is known to but a few, and that knowledge has long passed east, forgotten.",
desc = {
"Celestial classes are arcane users focused on the heavenly bodies.",
- "Most draw their powers from the Sun and the Moon.",
+ "Most draw their powers from the Sun and the Moons.",
},
descriptor_choices =
{
@@ -104,9 +104,9 @@ newBirthDescriptor{
locked_desc = "The balance of the heavens' powers is a daunting task. Mighty are those that stand in the twilight places, wielding both light and darkness in their mind.",
desc = {
"Anorithils hail from the Gates of Morning, the last bastion of the free people in the Far East.",
- "Their way of life is well represented by their motto 'We stand betwixt the Sun and Moon, where light and darkness meet. In the grey twilight we seek our destiny.'",
- "They can channel the power of the Sun and the Moon to burn and tear apart all who seek to destroy the Sunwall.",
- "Masters of Sun and Moon magic, they usually burn their foes with Sun rays before calling the fury of the stars.",
+ "Their way of life is well represented by their motto 'We stand betwixt the Sun and Moons, where light and darkness meet. In the grey twilight we seek our destiny.'",
+ "They can channel the power of the Sun and the Moons to burn and tear apart all who seek to destroy the Sunwall.",
+ "Masters of Sun and Moons magic, they usually burn their foes with Sun rays before calling the fury of the stars.",
"Their most important stats are: Magic and Cunning",
"#GOLD#Stat modifiers:",
"#LIGHT_BLUE# * +0 Strength, +0 Dexterity, +0 Constitution",
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/chats/jewelry-store.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/chats/jewelry-store.lua
index 71fe17502677e190abea8b541e2053b95e113a69..6e32ea09eacb38bbf4daafeddf432ed7ce8b8dd4 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/chats/jewelry-store.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/chats/jewelry-store.lua
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ I will not make you pay a fee for it since you helped me so much, but I am afrai
newChat{ id="quest",
text = [[#LIGHT_GREEN#*He quickly looks at the tome and looks amazed.*#WHITE# This is an amazing find! Truly amazing!
With this knowledge I could create much potent amulets. However, this requires a special place of power to craft such items.
-There are rumours about a site of power in the southern mountains. Old legends tell about a place where a part of the Moon melted when it got too close to the Sun and fell from the sky.
+There are rumours about a site of power in the southern mountains. Old legends tell about a place where a part of the Winterglow Moon melted when it got too close to the Sun and fell from the sky.
A lake formed in the crater of the crash. The water of this lake, soaked in intense Moonlight for eons, should be sufficient to forge powerful artifacts!
Go to the lake and then summon me with this scroll. I will retire to study the tome, awaiting your summon.]],
answers = {
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/chats/unremarkable-cave-bosses.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/chats/unremarkable-cave-bosses.lua
index 064381cc49fec1e1466e3f035a2615319c264945..9d3cfdda7f5e577eea31975ac7c7ccb942356dd2 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/chats/unremarkable-cave-bosses.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/chats/unremarkable-cave-bosses.lua
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ game.player:grantQuest("strange-new-world")
newChat{ id="welcome",
text = [[#LIGHT_GREEN#*A beautiful Elven woman in golden robes stands before you, facing an orc clad in mail.*#WHITE#
-Fillarel: "Abandon this fight, orc! You cannot win: I stand with the power of the Sun and the shadows of the Moon."
+Fillarel: "Abandon this fight, orc! You cannot win: I stand with the power of the Sun and the shadows of the Moons."
Krogar: "Ha! It's only been one hour and you already look tired, my 'lady'."
#LIGHT_GREEN#*As you enter the room they notice you.*#WHITE#
Fillarel: "You! @playerdescriptor.race@! Help me defeat this monster or begone!"
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/chats/unremarkable-cave-fillarel.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/chats/unremarkable-cave-fillarel.lua
index ca204a943e71af8bfee0dbcc02635874fde3d960..05b0722fa475e049c9a49cc9e849646850c2c172 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/chats/unremarkable-cave-fillarel.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/chats/unremarkable-cave-fillarel.lua
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ newChat{ id="welcome",
}
newChat{ id="what",
- text = [[I am an Anorithil, a mage of the Sun and Moon; we fight all that is evil. I was with a group of Sun Paladins; we came from the Gates of Morning to the east.
+ text = [[I am an Anorithil, a mage of the Sun and Moons; we fight all that is evil. I was with a group of Sun Paladins; we came from the Gates of Morning to the east.
My companions were... were slaughtered by orcs, and I nearly died as well. Thank you again for your help.]],
answers = {
{"It was my pleasure. But may I ask a favor myself? I am not from these lands. I used a farportal guarded by orcs deep below the Iron Throne and was brought here.", action=function(npc, player) game:setAllowedBuild("divine") game:setAllowedBuild("divine_anorithil", true) end, jump="sunwall"},
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/general/objects/world-artifacts-far-east.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/general/objects/world-artifacts-far-east.lua
index 6a19b72a1b570b906bbe20c46d6cdfdc726d5b74..7bebafac3fa4088b4cfa529f02a66319c41eb502 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/general/objects/world-artifacts-far-east.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/general/objects/world-artifacts-far-east.lua
@@ -57,9 +57,9 @@ newEntity{ base = "BASE_SCROLL", define_as = "JEWELER_SUMMON", subtype="tome", n
newEntity{ base = "BASE_AMULET",
power_source = {arcane=true},
unique = true,
- name = "Pendent of the Sun and Moon", color = colors.LIGHT_SLATE,
+ name = "Pendent of the Sun and Moons", color = colors.LIGHT_SLATE,
unided_name = "a gray and gold pendent",
- desc = [[This small pendent depicts a hematite moon eclipsing a golden sun and according to legend was worn by one of the Sunwall's founders.]],
+ desc = [[This small pendent depicts a hematite moons eclipsing a golden sun and according to legend was worn by one of the Sunwall's founders.]],
level_range = {35, 45},
rarity = 300,
cost = 200,
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/lore/misc.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/lore/misc.lua
index 5582ead35aad0fb178814f3865d8f851db9aae1e..8d156dda84ab9b246574f3e0ee1c8b0b111ef6ef 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/lore/misc.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/lore/misc.lua
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ newLore{
id = "creation-human",
category = "myths of creation",
name = "human myth of creation",
- lore = [[At the start of time Sun was born, and Moon, and Eyal raised from the Darkness.
+ lore = [[At the start of time Sun was born, and Moons, and Eyal raised from the Darkness.
And Gerlyk walked Eyal with his three brothers.
But one day Gerlyk walked alone and realised he was alone, and he desired company.
So Gerlyk took a burning coal, and put stones around it, and wrapped it in earth, and bathed it in water and breathed his breath into it, and it became alive. And Gerlyk named it Human.
@@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ newLore{
lore = [[Running man, running man
Your time is ending soon
Running man, running man
-Will not save sun nor moon
+Will not save sun nor moons
Running man, running man
Survival growing slim
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/lore/zigur.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/lore/zigur.lua
index 812ccef738439f4adfac9ba8e02c743cda05b3ff..018e4c9db5dc9ce5b07ae99322da08ad58ad4507 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/lore/zigur.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/lore/zigur.lua
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ newLore{
One day however several people in the town fell ill from a mystery disease. Rumours spread that my potions were to blame, and people stopped coming to my shop. My business was in ruins, and I soon ran the risk of becoming destitute. Then one of the elders died, and though he had been ill for some time, I was blamed for his death. People said I had laid a hex on him, and murmurs arose of witchcraft.
-I still remember how peaceful the evening had seemed when the townsfolk came for me. I was looking up at the brightness of the stars and the clear crescent moon, thinking of how I should restart my business, when I heard shouts from the distance. I saw the crowd appear from round the corner, advancing with their torches. I screamed for help, but they broke through my door, smashed through my windows and grabbed me. They dragged me outside and set their torches to my house. I was stripped to my skin and beaten heavily whilst they cursed and jeered, and even the man who had been my fiancé spat on my face and cursed me.
+I still remember how peaceful the evening had seemed when the townsfolk came for me. I was looking up at the brightness of the stars and the clear crescent summerglow moon, thinking of how I should restart my business, when I heard shouts from the distance. I saw the crowd appear from round the corner, advancing with their torches. I screamed for help, but they broke through my door, smashed through my windows and grabbed me. They dragged me outside and set their torches to my house. I was stripped to my skin and beaten heavily whilst they cursed and jeered, and even the man who had been my fiancé spat on my face and cursed me.
They pulled me over grass and stone to the town square, and though half-blinded by the tears and my swollen flesh I could still make out the wooden stake they were erecting. I tried to cry out, I tried to beg for mercy, but their response was to hold me down by my throat and pull out my tongue with the blacksmith's tongs. As I coughed up blood they put me against the wooden pole and used barbed chords to tie my wrists to it above my head. The pain was unbearable and I passed out, and did not wake until I could feel the burning at my feet. The crowd were cheering as the smoke began to wrap around me, and they cheered louder with every pained scream I released from my lungs.
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/texts/intro-sunwall.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/texts/intro-sunwall.lua
index ff4ff9fa9194ef4a7205f3b6475f5ad0e84a7d21..012f85c378be53f08e1186cc262ee24d97b12abe 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/texts/intro-sunwall.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/texts/intro-sunwall.lua
@@ -22,5 +22,5 @@ You are a citizen of the Sunwall, and like many of your age you have been traine
Nagas have been sighted in the Slazish Fens on the other side of the Sunwall Mountains. Their objective is unclear, but an assault from both sides would be truly devastating at such a pivotal time for your people. Though there are few forces to spare on the front line against the Prides, you have volunteered to investigate the naga threat and stop them if need be.
-By the power of the Sun and the blessings of the Moon you step forth to find your fate.
+By the power of the Sun and the blessings of the Moons you step forth to find your fate.
]]
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/texts/unlock-divine_anorithil.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/texts/unlock-divine_anorithil.lua
index 05be801d8622b237635580572ccd6a7494ffd217..23afc6a2cbf12efbc83bb229b2621495b5fd0607 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/texts/unlock-divine_anorithil.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/texts/unlock-divine_anorithil.lua
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ return "New Class: #LIGHT_GREEN#Anorithil (Celestial)",
[[
In the uttermost east, on the continent known only as the Far East, dwell the last remnants of Elves and Humans, fighting the Orc Pride and the many perils of the Far East.
-Anorithil are mages who are trained in special magic to focus the powers of the Sun and Moon.
+Anorithil are mages who are trained in special magic to focus the powers of the Sun and Moons.
They have learned to harness the energy of both shadows and light in their battle against the Pride.
-Their motto is: "We stand betwixt the Sun and Moon, where light and darkness meet. In the grey twilight we seek our destiny."
+Their motto is: "We stand betwixt the Sun and Moons, where light and darkness meet. In the grey twilight we seek our destiny."
You have helped one of them and can now create new characters with the #LIGHT_GREEN#Anorithil class#WHITE#.
diff --git a/ideas/setting-eyal.ods b/ideas/setting-eyal.ods
index 68e3117cff36aacb768ca3937b33aef70b09b131..72fec361aac7dd714174a9e4158ef272e7d2a8d3 100644
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