diff --git a/game/modules/tome/class/interface/TooltipsData.lua b/game/modules/tome/class/interface/TooltipsData.lua
index 40b54023c6606c1aadcb65300c5322acc4a8ff2e..4d3b63db2fe64e8a72c164979216b8d4f5c0cfc4 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/class/interface/TooltipsData.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/class/interface/TooltipsData.lua
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ TOOLTIP_VIM = [[#GOLD#Vim#LAST#
Vim represents the amount of life energy you control. Each corruption talent requires some.
It does not regenerates naturally, you need to drain it from yourself or you victims.
Each time you kill a creature you drain 10% of your Willpower as Vim.
-Also if you used a Corruption spell that costed Vim to kill a creature, that cost is refunded on death.
+Also if you used a Corruption spell that cost Vim to kill a creature, that cost is refunded on death.
]]
TOOLTIP_EQUILIBRIUM = [[#GOLD#Equilibrium#LAST#
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/combat.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/combat.lua
index 19fe99707a1428ba1152882a71bc1c159028c9a1..d15b88c02909eb394a601a5b9759fa4003921b0f 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/combat.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/combat.lua
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ newTalent{
info = function(self, t)
local damage = t.getDamage(self, t)
return ([[In a pure display of power you project a melee attack, doing %d%% damage.
- The range will increase with the Strength stat]]):
+ The range will increase with the Strength stat.]]):
format(100 * damage)
end,
}
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/light.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/light.lua
index 2e7bff27ab1b92cc10d5b21e68c22e44aaa4f89d..76100dba31c7f702cb7b57a824e4dc2d41b06ed0 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/light.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/light.lua
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ newTalent{
info = function(self, t)
local absorb = t.getAbsorb(self, t)
return ([[A protective shield forms around you that lasts for up to 10 turns, negating %d damage.
- Max damage barrier can absorb will increase with your Magic stat.]]):
+ The max damage barrier can absorb will increase with your Magic stat.]]):
format(absorb)
end,
}
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/sun.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/sun.lua
index 2afa358f9678a97b3bbb144a714f577c9a139c23..51a6d5bb847e90e77585b4cceefa8e5783da3af9 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/sun.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/celestial/sun.lua
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ newTalent{
end,
info = function(self, t)
local damage = t.getDamage(self, t)
- return ([[Fire a beam of Sun flames at your foes, burning all those in line for %0.2f fire damage.
+ return ([[Fire a beam of Sun flames at your foes, burning all those in a line for %0.2f fire damage.
The damage will increase with the Magic stat.]]):
format(damDesc(self, DamageType.FIRE, damage))
end,
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/blight.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/blight.lua
index 3573e70e76171538d306e10bb08a05e6136876a6..f5a2840a175069badb324dba4d4577c0a2d39de7 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/blight.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/blight.lua
@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ newTalent{
return true
end,
info = function(self, t)
- return ([[Increasing your spell critical damage multiplier by %d%%.
- The damage will increase with your Magic stat.]]):
+ return ([[Increases your spell critical damage multiplier by %d%%.
+ The multiplier will increase with your Magic stat.]]):
format(self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 20, 60))
end,
}
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ newTalent{
end,
info = function(self, t)
return ([[Infect your target with a corrosive worm that deals %0.2f acid damage per turn for 10 turns.
- If the target dies while the worm is inside it will explode doing %0.2f acid damage in a radius of 4.
+ If the target dies while the worm is inside it will explode, doing %0.2f acid damage in a radius of 4.
The damage will increase with Magic stat.]]):
format(damDesc(self, DamageType.ACID, self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 10, 60)), damDesc(self, DamageType.ACID, self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 10, 230)))
end,
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ newTalent{
end,
info = function(self, t)
return ([[A furious poison storm rages around the caster, poisoning all creatures inside for doing %0.2f nature damage in 6 turns in a radius of %d for %d turns.
- Poisoning is cumulative, the longer they stay in they higher the poison they take.
+ Poisoning is cumulative, the longer they stay in the higher the poison damage they take.
The damage will increase with the Magic stat]]):format(damDesc(self, DamageType.NATURE, self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 12, 130)), self:getTalentRadius(t), 5 + self:getTalentLevel(t))
end,
}
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/blood.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/blood.lua
index 5bbc5c30f3e8635bafe70e64357eeb160b13df50..fc19953227d3347a982dd115b84dd9ed0530c5b3 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/blood.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/blood.lua
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ newTalent{
return true
end,
info = function(self, t)
- return ([[Projects a bolt of corrupted blood doing %0.2f blight damage and healing the caster for half the damage done.
+ return ([[Project a bolt of corrupted blood doing %0.2f blight damage and healing you for half the damage done.
The damage will increase with Magic stat.]]):format(damDesc(self, DamageType.BLIGHT, self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 10, 290)))
end,
}
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ newTalent{
end,
info = function(self, t)
return ([[Concentrate on the corruption you bring, increasing your spell critical chance by %d%%.
- Each time your spells are critical you enter a blood rage for 5 turns, increasing your blight and acid damage by %d%%.
+ Each time your spells go critical you enter a blood rage for 5 turns, increasing your blight and acid damage by %d%%.
The damage will increase with your Magic stat.]]):
format(self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 10, 14), self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 10, 30))
end,
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/bone.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/bone.lua
index 0f33eed1f375c7db3fc75cc2950dd648321c5076..a79767ae75f26dc90f08e05e8ea58d46aeb10bdd 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/bone.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/bone.lua
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ newTalent{
return true
end,
info = function(self, t)
- return ([[Conjures up spear of bones doing %0.2f physical damage to all targets in line.
+ return ([[Conjures up a spear of bones doing %0.2f physical damage to all targets in line.
The damage will increase with the Magic stat]]):format(damDesc(self, DamageType.PHYSICAL, self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 20, 200)))
end,
}
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ newTalent{
return true
end,
info = function(self, t)
- return ([[Bone shields start circling around you. They will each absorb fully one attack.
+ return ([[Bone shields start circling around you. They will each fully absorb one attack.
%d shield(s) will be generated.]]):
format(math.floor(self:getTalentLevel(t)))
end,
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/corruptions.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/corruptions.lua
index 84c9c6f0bb49405a8dda9fc5f7c20dd10cb4d313..4aaa6a5e858172301f7a6c001ca4d5f614ac3058 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/corruptions.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/corruptions.lua
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ newTalentType{ allow_random=true, no_silence=true, is_spell=true, type="corrupti
newTalentType{ allow_random=true, no_silence=true, is_spell=true, type="corruption/plague", name = "plague", description = "Spread diseases to your foes." }
newTalentType{ allow_random=true, no_silence=true, is_spell=true, type="corruption/scourge", name = "scourge", description = "Bring pain and destruction to the world." }
newTalentType{ allow_random=true, no_silence=true, is_spell=true, type="corruption/reaving-combat", name = "reaving combat", description = "Enhanced melee combat through the dark arts." }
-newTalentType{ allow_random=true, no_silence=true, is_spell=true, type="corruption/blood", name = "blood", description = "Harness the power of blood, both your own and your foes." }
+newTalentType{ allow_random=true, no_silence=true, is_spell=true, type="corruption/blood", name = "blood", description = "Harness the power of blood, both your own and your foes'." }
newTalentType{ allow_random=true, no_silence=true, is_spell=true, type="corruption/blight", name = "blight", description = "Bring corruption and decay to all who oppose you." }
newTalentType{ allow_random=true, no_silence=true, is_spell=true, type="corruption/shadowflame", name = "Shadowflame", description = "Harness the power of the demonic shadowflame." }
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/sanguisuge.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/sanguisuge.lua
index 374f42984c0dc47592efbb39836854a243184ae5..98efd37568ab8e8a9d02f9fffcfd312b10e79491 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/sanguisuge.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/sanguisuge.lua
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ newTalent{
end,
info = function(self, t)
return ([[Fires a bolt of blight, doing %0.2f blight damage and replenishing 20%% of it as vim energy.
- The amount of vim regained depends on the target's rank (higher rank give more vim).
+ The amount of vim regained depends on the target's rank (higher ranks give more vim).
The effect will increase with your Magic stat.]]):
format(damDesc(self, DamageType.BLIGHT, self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 25, 200)))
end,
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/shadowflame.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/shadowflame.lua
index 01d83d895a7d32800e8320558e1bf0e06617ad07..f6290d5f54dab84c13ac75e2da8057c11e0eb31b 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/shadowflame.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/shadowflame.lua
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ newTalent{
return true
end,
info = function(self, t)
- return ([[Turn into a wraith, allowing you to walk through walls (but does not prevent suffocation) for %d turns.
+ return ([[Turn into a wraith, allowing you to walk through walls (but not preventing suffocation) for %d turns.
Also increases your defense and armor by %d and %d.
The bonuses will increase with your Magic stat.]]):
format(4 + self:getTalentLevel(t), self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 5, 19), self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 5, 15))
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/vim.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/vim.lua
index c13626bfbb5ff7e2f546c7904d53b6133d9d228b..7c881186ed98bbc9425c0c5168584388dfa5b49b 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/vim.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/corruptions/vim.lua
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ newTalent{
info = function(self, t)
return ([[Feel the very existence of creatures around you for %d turns in a radius of 10.
The evil touch will reduce their blight resistance by %d%% but also make them aware of you.
- The damage will increase with Magic stat.]]):format(3 + self:getTalentLevel(t), self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 10, 45))
+ The resistance will decrease with Magic stat.]]):format(3 + self:getTalentLevel(t), self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 10, 45))
end,
}
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ newTalent{
return true
end,
info = function(self, t)
- return ([[Open a dark portal to the target zone, all creatures caught inside will be teleported to your location and you to theirs.
+ return ([[Open a dark portal to the target zone. All creatures caught inside will be teleported to your location and you to theirs.
All creatures(except you) traversing the portal will catch a random disease doing %0.2f blight damage per turn for 6 turns and reducing one of its physical stats (strength, constitution, dexterity) by %d.
The damage will increase with the Magic stat]]):format(damDesc(self, DamageType.BLIGHT, self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 12, 80)), self:combatTalentSpellDamage(t, 5, 25))
end,
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/cursed-form.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/cursed-form.lua
index 3b79f05fad8bea837bb2e0a22668de93c98b212c..80120334721a01e627f060b1a72bb71bc66b0d9f 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/cursed-form.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/cursed-form.lua
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ newTalent{
self.unnatural_body_healing_factor = -0.5
self.healing_factor = (self.healing_factor or 1) + self.unnatural_body_healing_factor
end
-
+
-- heal
local maxHeal = self.unnatural_body_heal or 0
if maxHeal > 0 then
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ newTalent{
local modifier1, modifier2 = "more", "more"
if resist > 0 then modifier1 = "less" end
if resist + 18 > 0 then modifier2 = "less" end
- return ([[Your body's strength is fed by your hatred. With each kill you regenerate %d life at a rate of %0.1f life per turn. This healing cannot be reduced but most other forms of healing are reduced by 50%%. You also take %d%% %s damage (at 0 Hate) to %d%% %s damage (at 10+ Hate).
+ return ([[Your body's strength is fed by your hatred. With each kill you regenerate %d life at a rate of %0.1f life per turn. This healing cannot be reduced, but most other forms of healing are reduced by 50%%. You also take %d%% %s damage (at 0 Hate) to %d%% %s damage (at 10+ Hate).
Healing from kills improves with the Willpower stat.]]):format(healPerKill, regenRate, math.abs(resist), modifier1, math.abs(resist + 18), modifier2)
end,
}
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/force-of-will.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/force-of-will.lua
index 7b5a980eca29afef1b1e94e228d00d3c2b0c4d62..3232f34fdfb396e7e481f0b276654287d552be4b 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/force-of-will.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/force-of-will.lua
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ newTalent{
end,
info = function(self, t)
local maxDamage = t.getMaxDamage(self, t)
- return ([[Deflect 50%% of incoming damage with the force of your will. You may deflect up to %d damage but first your hate must slowly feed your strength (-0.02 hate regeneration while building strength).
+ return ([[Deflect 50%% of incoming damage with the force of your will. You may deflect up to %d damage, but first your hate must slowly feed your strength (-0.02 hate regeneration while building strength).
The maximum damage deflected increases with the Willpower stat.]]):format(maxDamage)
end,
}
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ newTalent{
local power = (1 - (distance / radius))
local localDamage = damage * power
local dazeDuration = t.getDazeDuration(self, t)
-
+
forceHit(self, target, blastX, blastY, damage, math.max(0, knockback - distance), 15, power)
if target:canBe("stun") then
target:setEffect(target.EFF_DAZED, dazeDuration, {src=self})
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/primal-magic.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/primal-magic.lua
index e722970c759ae2c48a8e771820c5c1682fe13eee..b9ce60a988bb7da5deb2c6af551743e225b4ace2 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/primal-magic.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/primal-magic.lua
@@ -63,28 +63,28 @@ newTalent{
self.arcaneBolts = nil
return
end
-
+
local x, y = target.x, target.y
local tg = {type="bolt", range=range, talent=t, display={particle="bolt_fire", trail="firetrail"}}
self:projectile(tg, target.x, target.y, DamageType.ARCANE, self.arcaneBolts.damage, nil)
-
+
game:playSoundNear(self, "talents/fire")
end,
action = function(self, t)
local range = self:getTalentRange(t)
local damage = t.getDamage(self, t)
-
+
--local tg = {type="bolt", range=range, talent=t, display={particle="bolt_fire", trail="firetrail"}}
--local x, y, target = self:getTarget(tg)
--if not x or not y or not target or core.fov.distance(self.x, self.y, x, y) > range then return nil end
-
+
self.arcaneBolts = { damage = damage, range = range, duration = 4 }
-
+
return true
end,
do_arcaneBolts = function(self, t)
t.fireArcaneBolt(self, t)
-
+
if self.arcaneBolts then
self.arcaneBolts.duration = self.arcaneBolts.duration - 1
if self.arcaneBolts.duration <= 0 then self.arcaneBolts = nil end
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ newTalent{
end,
info = function(self, t)
local damage = t.getDamage(self, t)
- return ([[Each turn for 4 turns you fire a bolt of arcane energy at your nearest enemy inclicting %d damage.
+ return ([[Each turn for 4 turns you fire a bolt of arcane energy at your nearest enemy inflicting %d damage.
The damage will increase with the Magic stat.]]):format(damDesc(self, DamageType.ARCANE, damage))
end,
}
@@ -115,17 +115,17 @@ newTalent{
local tg = {type="ball", nolock=true, pass_terrain=false, nowarning=true, range=range, radius=0, requires_knowledge=true}
x, y = self:getTarget(tg)
if not x then return nil end
-
+
-- Target code does not restrict the target coordinates to the range, it lets the project function do it
-- but we cant ...
local _ _, x, y = self:canProject(tg, x, y)
-
+
if not self:canMove(x, y) or (self.x == x and self.y == y) then return nil end
if not self:canBe("teleport") or game.level.map.attrs(x, y, "no_teleport") then
game.logSeen(self, "Your attempt to displace fails!")
return true
end
-
+
game.level.map:particleEmitter(self.x, self.y, 1, "teleport_out")
self:move(x, y, true)
game.level.map:particleEmitter(self.x, self.y, 1, "teleport_in")
@@ -186,21 +186,21 @@ newTalent{
{type="light_zone"},
nil, self:spellFriendlyFire()
)
-
+
tg = {type="hit", range=10}
self:project(tg, self.x, self.y, DamageType.CONFUSION, {
dur = 4,
dam = 75
})
-
+
game:playSoundNear(self, "talents/fireflash")
-
+
return true
end,
info = function(self, t)
local damage = t.getDamage(self, t)
return ([[Bathes the target in raw magic inflicting %d damage. Such wild magic is difficult to control and if you fail to keep your wits you will be confused for 4 turns.
- The damage will increase with the Magic stat]]):
+ The damage will increase with the Magic stat.]]):
format(damDesc(self, DamageType.ARCANE, damage))
end,
}
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/shadows.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/shadows.lua
index 9f00ce19a2d82986aed196728572a984689156cf..41aa14fd09e9133e6333df4dc6ccbea9ad2d3dc5 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/shadows.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/cursed/shadows.lua
@@ -569,6 +569,6 @@ newTalent{
local combatAtk = t.getCombatAtk(self, t)
local incDamage = t.getIncDamage(self, t)
local dominateChance = t.getDominateChance(self, t)
- return ([[Instill hate in your shadows strengthening their attacks. They gain %d%% extra accuracy and %d%% extra damage. The fury of their attacks gives them the ability to try to Dominate their foes, increasing all damage taken by that foe for 4 turns. (%d%% chance at range 1)]]):format(combatAtk, incDamage, dominateChance)
+ return ([[Instill hate in your shadows, strengthening their attacks. They gain %d%% extra accuracy and %d%% extra damage. The fury of their attacks gives them the ability to try to Dominate their foes, increasing all damage taken by that foe for 4 turns. (%d%% chance at range 1)]]):format(combatAtk, incDamage, dominateChance)
end,
}
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/psionic/augmented-mobility.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/psionic/augmented-mobility.lua
index 34fb70d9c74d7b826d89738b601881c82f9c9386..8b2d58dff6e4f70188d7833c23b8e886f9d47083 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/psionic/augmented-mobility.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/psionic/augmented-mobility.lua
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ newTalent{
end,
info = function(self, t)
local range = self:getTalentRange(t)
- return ([[You perform a precision, telekinetically-enhanced leap, landing up to %d squares away.]]):
+ return ([[You perform a precise, telekinetically-enhanced leap, landing up to %d squares away.]]):
format(range)
end,
}
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/techniques/techniques.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/techniques/techniques.lua
index 6c736265fa2d5b4ddc62e83bcf5807f28a1fe879..478db6e4fdcc2215c2684c197e90d1c0c00e06e8 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/techniques/techniques.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/techniques/techniques.lua
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ newTalentType{ allow_random=true, type="technique/bloodthirst", name = "bloodthi
newTalentType{ allow_random=true, type="technique/field-control", name = "field control", generic = true, description = "Control the battlefield using various techniques." }
newTalentType{ allow_random=true, type="technique/combat-techniques-active", name = "combat techniques", description = "Generic combat oriented techniques." }
newTalentType{ allow_random=true, type="technique/combat-techniques-passive", name = "combat veteran", description = "Generic combat oriented techniques." }
-newTalentType{ allow_random=true, type="technique/combat-training", name = "combat training", generic = true, description = "Teaches to use various armors and improves health." }
+newTalentType{ allow_random=true, type="technique/combat-training", name = "combat training", generic = true, description = "Teaches to use various armours, weapons and improves health." }
newTalentType{ allow_random=true, type="technique/magical-combat", name = "magical combat", description = "The blending together of magic and melee prowess." }
-- Unarmed Combat
diff --git a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/techniques/weaponshield.lua b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/techniques/weaponshield.lua
index 8409024b1de1a6a4d69fec534a7ec59a01371d39..a3fe57286e9c20902694c5dc981ca62b718641dd 100644
--- a/game/modules/tome/data/talents/techniques/weaponshield.lua
+++ b/game/modules/tome/data/talents/techniques/weaponshield.lua
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ newTalent{
return true
end,
info = function(self, t)
- return ([[Hits the target with two shield strikes doing %d%% and %d%% shield damage. If it hits second time it stuns target for %d turns
+ return ([[Hits the target with two shield strikes doing %d%% and %d%% shield damage. If it hits a second time it stuns target for %d turns
The damage multiplier increases with your Strength and second strike with Shield Expertise talent level.]])
:format(100 * self:combatTalentWeaponDamage(t, 1, 1.7, self:getTalentLevel(self.T_SHIELD_EXPERTISE)),
100 * self:combatTalentWeaponDamage(t, 1.2, 2.1, self:getTalentLevel(self.T_SHIELD_EXPERTISE)),